To Trollope-l
November 16, 1998
Re: The Belton Estate, Chs 1-6: Somber Opening
I am liking this book too :). Looking down my list of messages arrived I see one about Felix Holt and hope to respond this evening or sometime tomorrow. Right now what I will say in favor of Trollope is that while when I began Felix Holt I found myself admiring George Eliot in comparison with Trollope, when I had gotten into the story, I found myself preferring Trollope because he made the story emerge out of the inner psychology of the characters while she seemed to develop hers out of external circumstances leaving the psychological portraiture as icing on the cake, a fascinating deep series of passages, but not something that set the plot rolling. In Rachel Ray, Lady Anna (which I am reading just now too), and _Belton Estate_ one does not rely on complicated external circumstances to thrust us forward.
In sum, things begin pretty badly. The remnants of the Amedroz family consist of a daughter and father. The son, Charles, in part taking after his father, was worse than a useless drone; he lived extravagantly a debauched life, exhausted the revenue of the estates and forced the sale of whatever was incoming producing, and then when cornered because he had yet more enormous debts, committed suicide. The story is not his, but it's his character which begins it -- his and his father's, another of these older male aristocrats who Trollope presents as cold, selfish men who ruin their children's lives (examples include George Bertram's father, Captain Marrable, Mr Maule, Mr Vavasour). When we meet him though he is shattered, feeble, nervous, and his relationship with Clara, his impoverished daughter, recalls Thady's with his enervated father, Nina Balatka with hers. Another portrait of Mr Trollope and son is what we are given.
Clara though is the story. The inference from the very beginning is she is forced into the position of an encumbrance most unfairly. One feels she could do so much, if only there were something given her to do. She is intelligent, strong, capable. And here she is waiting for some man to take her. Mrs Winterfield is another rigid religious woman (recalling Mrs Prime, the mother in John Caldigate) who is unfairly leaving her property to a man who doesn't need it, Captain Aylmer. I don't agree with the introduction by John Halperin which suggests that Clara fell in love with Aylmer because other people admired him; I see in Trollope's portrait of Clara's love an insistence on the irrational and sexual element in love.
Who could resist Will Belton? He's wonderful. The portrait demonstates how Trollope can identify with the non-intellectual. Will is all integrity, humanity, good-heartedness, sincerity, perception, everything but sex appeal. Sex appeal appears to be related to enigmas in the man, withdrawnness, a challenge (at least in this novel). Will is none of these. He has not a shred of pretension. The gift of the cow is perfect.
I found the theme of cousins well done -- ironically portrayed as Clara's assumption that because Will is her cousin she must be safe. In fact, middle class young people in the country married their cousins because they married whom they met (one sees this in the Austens).
Mrs Askerton is another of these women with a sexual past which is not limited to one man. Interesting that Trollope does give her a tone which makes her teasing unpleasant. Trollope does adhere in Clara's story to the notion that virgins instinctively say no first when asked (this seems to be a male idea in 18th-19th century novels). With Mrs Askerton he suggests an unchaste past makes a woman an uncomfortable creature in and of herself, never mind how she is ostracised by others.
What else? I liked the description of Somerset. Trollope has more gifts for landscape description than he's given credit for. He has a wonderful ear for what people can be supposed really to say to one another.
I can see how the novels must have connected in Trollope's mind: they are both love stories set in the provincial worlds of western England. They are both stories about money and property. Here I think it is not the community which fascinates Trollope but rather the inner life of the heroine.
Ellen Moody
To Trollope-l
Subject: TROL Déjà Vue
Sender: owner-trollope-l@smtp.teleport.com
November 16, 1998
Here we are at the beginning of The Belton Estate, and it seems very familiar. Again we have a decrepit house, an ineffectual house owner, his doomed son, and his nubile daughter. We've seen it before with the MacDermot family.
But things here are different. Although the son is fated for destruction, his demise does not come as a result of rebellion against the Crown. The daughter is wiser than Feemy. The family here is safe within the Established Church. And a rollicking deus ex machina appears, not at the end of the story but at the very beginning. Furthermore, The Belton Estate has a mystery woman, Mrs. Askerson. Yes, it's a different novel with a subplot that makes it more sophisticated than the adventures of the family at Ballycloran. We'll see what happens next, although I think most new readers of this novel (which I am not) will pretty well guess how things will turn out.
Re: The Belton Estate: Will as Deus Ex Machina
I agree with Sig that anyone who has read previous books by Trollope will recognize a number of paradigms at this novel's openings. Henry James's main complaint about the book was it was "deja vu all over again" (to quote the famous baseball player).
Yet at the same time there's a sophisticated undercurrent about sex which relates to the Askertons. I also think the atmosphere is unique to the novel; each novel by Trollope seems to have its own peculiar tone and imagery. Here's its southwest England, Somerset, and the tone is strongly emotional, an aspect of Will's frankness, and the directness of Clara's approach to life.
I did like Sig's likening Will to a Deus Ex Machina. What that brings out is the story could have ended more or less happily in Chapter 4. Clara brings her troubles on herself by refusing Will; the two Amedroz males obviously have made a mess of their lives. This theme of taking responsibility for one's actions even if one is not in full control of one's consciousness seems to be strong in the book; those who don't take responsibility, end up dead or maimed.
Ellen Moody
To: Ellen Moody Ellen Moody wrote:
I felt the same way in the beginning, Ellen. I am still juggling both
books (and trying not to confuse characters...), and am now preferring
Belton Estate, whereas I had first preferred Felix Holt. Eliot
seems to have drawn me in better at the beginning, and I can't quite put
my finger on the reason for that. Your point about internal/external
circumstances is an interesting one, and could perhaps be the underlying
reason for my own preference.
On a different thread, I find it interesting that both books portray
main female characters who are motherless. Both women seem quite strong
and capable, while, at the same time, encumbered by their social
status/lack of money. I'll be interested to see the further differences
between the two as I read.
This is an aggravating point, and another which seems to be prevalent in
19th-C novels. The women are only as good as the men they catch,
apparently, which is a little hard to swallow from a modern point of
view.
She does make the allowance for 1,500/year, but leaves that unfinished
before her death. It was implied that Captain Aylmer would carry
through with the promise, but, of course, Clara was too proud to accept
it.
I agree. I believe Clara's love for Aylmer was her own, and not caused
by anyone else's opinion of him. That's how it seems to me, so far.
Ah, yes! Poor Will! I liked him from the start and was rooting for
Clara to fall into his arms. I'm still not giving up hope on that and I
know what my hunch is...
Exactly true. When a catch is too "easy," it becomes unappealing.
Will's very availability/accessibility is a mark against him, it seems.
Ditto for our poor Clara with Mr. Aylmer.
It was humorous that Clara felt safe from Will's lovemaking because he
was her cousin. I enjoyed her waffling between "I am safe from him" to
"perhaps I'm not so safe..." and back to "I am safe (with crossed
fingers..." Quite funny.
I haven't gotten to the point in which her relation to Will Belton is
revealed, but I can only suspect he knows something quite compromising.
Whether he's being quiet for her reputation's sake, or because he really
can't remember, I'm not sure.
She's a bit cheeky with Clara on the subject of suitors, I agree. She
has a trace of venom/bitterness in her, which makes me all the more
curious about exactly what she's hiding.
Wasn't there something about it being all right to refuse twice, but not
three times? It's a bit fuzzy but I thought I did see some reference to
this.
It's Mrs. Askerton's husband whom I wonder about... The man disappears
for several weeks out of the year and I just wonder what the man is
really up to. He seems a bit shady, as well.
Lisa Guidarini
To Trollope-l
November 20, 1998
Re: The Belton Estate: Chs 1-6: Will and Clara
Before we go on to next week's chapters I thought I would say
how charming I found the near-love scenes between Will
and Clara. There was a full-throated quality about them
which seemed to spring from the page with intense emotion.
In the morning scene when he leaves just before he
after he says goodbye, I thought Trollope hit the perfect
note: delicate and tactful yet firmly and fully stated
are the longings of Will and the confused responses of
Clara.
I can see why Trollope would have connected this book
in his mind to Rachel Ray. However, there is a great
difference between the innocent and directness
and simply gaiety of Rachel even after she goes to
the ball, and the sophistication and bitterness of
Clara's understanding of life; there is also a decided
contrast between the suavity and careful if determined
diplomacy of a Luke and the rough and ready sincerity
of Will.
Ellen Moody
From: John Mize To some extent The Belton Estate seems to be a rewriting of Pride
and Prejudice. In both novels an estate is entailed to a distant relative
who wants to do the right thing by marrying a daughter of the family
currently holding the estate. In both cases a weak, greedy, silly parent
wants the daughter to marry the distant relative, Mr. Belton being similar
in many respects to Mrs. Bennet. Of course Mr. Belton is silly and passive,
while Mrs. Bennet is silly and hysterical.
Of course Austen's daughter and cousin are not very much like
Trollope's characters. Clara Belton is certainly no Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth almost seems to enjoy turning down the silly Mr. Collins'
proposal, while Clara is so upset at turning down Will that she can't help
but cry. I have the feeling that not only did Trollope consider Elizabeth's
independent attitude unrealistic, but he viewed it as almost an affront to
male dignity. Trollope certainly didn't care much for Austen's men, once
claiming that George Knightley in Emma was a "stick."
Will Belton is also not a fool like Mr. Collins, although part of
the difference in the situation is due to the authors' respective tones.
Trollope would have been kinder (or at least, fairer) to a Mr. Collins,
while Austen would have less respectful to a Will Belton. Trollope's
attitude toward Belton reminds me of his aside in Rachel Ray in which he
favorably compares the inarticulate intelligence of the country gentry to
the wordy, pretentious intellectualism of the London elite. Belton is that
sort of practical man of the earth with none of your high flown pretentious
intellectual airs. His complaints about outsiders who buy shooting and
think they are landowners reminds me of rural Georgians who complain about
lawyers and real estate developers from Atlanta coming down to the country
to hunt deer. "They come down here with their $2000 rifles and L.L. Bean
hunting clothes, and they are just about as likely to kill someone's cow or
another hunter as a deer."
To Trollope-l
November 21, 1998
Re: The Belton Estate and "The Parson's Daughter of Oxney Colne"
I too thought of Austen while reading _The Belton Estate_. Since I am
so often absorbed by her as a topic this is not surprising, but I agree
with John that a number of the plot elements recall Austen's novels --
I see in Clara a version of Fanny Price (situation, character type &
so on).
But I was more struck by the close analogy between the opening situation
of the aunt, captain, and Clara and the central paradigm of "The Parson's
Daughter of Oxney Colne." Both also take place in the beautiful countryside
of western England (so for that matter does Rachel Ray). Now I don't think the
novel is "an
expansion" of the short story; writers don't work that way.
You can't "expand" a story like some rubber band or glue. But we can
see in these parallels between the short stories and these shorter novels
Trollope's concern with irrational sexual enthrallment and in the case
of "The Parson's Daughter" and The Belton Estate what Halperin calls
"mediated desire." The "Parson's Daughter" insists on the Captain's
boredom once he realises how much Patience loves him.
Anyway upon reading Bart's posting I went off to check the dates and
find that there is no necessary alignment of "The
Parson's Daughter" and The Belton Estate. Trollope wrote "The Parson's Daughter
of Oxney
Colne" between the 13th and 19th of January 1861; it
appeared on March 2nd, 1861 in the magazine, The London Review. It was
first published in book form in Tales of All Countries: Second Series
in February 1863. The closest novel to it is The Small House (an
Austenian book too). The Belton Estate was written a number of stories
and novels later: from the 30th of January to the 4th of September 1865;
it was published as a book in 1865 by Chapman and Hall; the novel written
just before is The Claverings; the novel written just after, Nina
Balatka. Now I can see a "feel" which unites Belton Estate with
Nina Balatka; something about the heroine. The story which precedes
The Belton Estate is the very great (I think it one of Trollope's great
short stories) "Malachi's Cove."
Ellen Moody
Subject: Re: TROL The Belton Estate, Chs 1-6: Somber Opening
" Right now what I will say in favor of Trollope is that while when I
began Felix Holt I found myself admiring George Eliot in comparison
with Trollope, when I had gotten into the story, I found myself
preferring Trollope..."
"Clara though is the story. The inference from the very beginning is
she is forced into the position of an encumbrance most unfairly. One
feels she could do so much, if only there were something given her to
do. She is intelligent, strong, capable. And here she is waiting for
some man to take her."
"Mrs Winterfield is another rigid religious woman (recalling Mrs Prime,
the mother in John Caldigate) who is unfairly leaving her property to
a man who doesn't need it, Captain Aylmer."
"I don't agree with the introduction by John Halperin which suggests
that Clara fell in love with Aylmer because other people admired him; I
see in Trollope's portrait of Clara's love an insistence on the
irrational and sexual element in love."
"Who could resist Will Belton? He's wonderful. The portrait
demonstates how Trollope can identify with the non-intellectual. Will
is all integrity, humanity, good-heartedness, sincerity, perception,
everything but sex appeal."
"Sex appeal appears to be related to enigmas in the man, withdrawnness,
a challenge (at least in this novel). Will is none of these. He has
not a shred of pretension. The gift of the cow is perfect."
"I found the theme of cousins well done -- ironically portrayed as
Clara's assumption that because Will is her cousin she must be safe.
In fact, middle class young people in the country married their cousins
because they married whom they met (one sees this in the Austens)."
"Mrs Askerton is another of these women with a sexual past which is not
limited to one man."
"Interesting that Trollope does give her a tone which makes her teasing
unpleasant."
Trollope does adhere in Clara's story to the notion that virgins
instinctively say no first when asked (this seems to be a male idea in
18th-19th century novels)."
"With Mrs Askerton he suggests an unchaste past makes a woman an
uncomfortable creature in and of herself, never mind how she is
ostracised by others."
Subject: The Belton Estate: Will Belton and Mr Collins
Sender: owner-trollope-l@smtp.teleport.com
who must run off now but found this week's chapters very good. Tears
came to my eyes the first time I read "The Parson's Daughter."
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