Written 1859 (1 September - 29 October), inbetween writing
Castle Richmond
Serialized 1860 (October 20 & 27),
Cassell's Illustrated Family Paper
Published in a book 1861 (November), Tales of All Countries:
First Series, Chapman and Hall
To: trollope-l@teleport.com What I like about the short stories is they are short.
You can sit down, with a cup of strong coffee (Seattle Coffee Company Decaf
Espresso) and read one at a sitting of about an hour. Most enjoyable.
This one is another goodie. It has travel pictures worthy of Michael Palin
or Bill Bryson. Romance. Foreign parts. And a twist to the ending, which
you will hardly expect.
The setting is real, and again comes from Trollope's own experience.
I am sure you will like this one.
To Trollope-L
December 26, 1997
Re: Short Story: "The Chateau of Prince Polignac"
Like Robert, I like this quiet little tale. I
have never "set" it for a class because it
is quiet, a slice of life or mood piece, and I suspect
many students would be bored or at a loss for
something to say. Students like stories where
something is definitely doing or there is some
clear moral. I think of the hobbits who as we
all know "liked to have books filled with things that
they already [know], set out fair and square with
no contradictions."
This story has some strange elements
in it which would be foreign to students, such
as the "struggle" Mrs. Thompson has in
accepting as her husband a "tailor." A wine
merchant, a jeweller, even a watchmaker would
have been no trouble for this lady to marry
(I had almost said swallow) at all, but a
tailor requires fortitute. "But however" (as
Jane Austen would say) the lady comes
through; she rises above class prejudice
and marries him. This theme of the tailor
who is so infra dig is also found in
Lady Anna -- there too our heroine meets
the challenge (far more serious) and
marries her beloved who is (worse
and worse) the son of a tailor who is
also a radical politically. As E. P. Thompson
shows in his great book The Making of
the English Working Class, the two
went together.
Some other things that might seem strange
to them include the lady who decides to live
in a hotel in a foreign country because
it's cheaper and enables her to keep up
"appearances" on a small income. Students
would wonder why she didn't get a job.
This group of people who are not attached
to any country but wander about unattached
do not enter public discourse in the way
they did in the 19th century--though they
are not yet gone from us.
What do I like about the story? The opening,
a long picturesque description of
a French town perched on some rocks across
a mountain. It is drawn lovingly, and since
I have travelled through France in a train
and by car a couple of times I'd like to
say it is accurate. I have seen these
places, the old castle, and especially
the Romanesque church (Sutherland
ed, pp 116-7). The church
is best when it is not a tourist attraction,
when no-one goes there who is anyone.
There are also such places tucked away
everywhere in England. In Germany,
especially in the south, the churches
left after the bombing of WWII
are more Baroque, Catholic,
and gilded, but they may be found if
you have the nerve to get on a bus and
just go about. It's actually remarkable
how many churches are left since the
bombs rained down.
I also like the long description of everyone
at table (pp 117-20). The scene is true to life and
slowly Trollope builds up the relationship
that has been growing between Mrs
Thompson and M. Lacordaire. Lacordaire
has a "cor" in it--an allusion to heart in
French (as in "cri de coeur"). Neither of
our lovers is very young or very handsome.
The question becomes, Shall she go
with him to visit the chateau. People
always imagine the big events in life
to have been precipitated by something
that is clearly marked, but momentous
moments can be felt coming out of
serendipitous ones which in this time
and place suddenly are meaningful.
The feeling conveyed
is that although the pirate days of our
man of the heart and our lady with
her two children are over, and this
is a sensible marriage, it is also a
marriage based on a quiet friendship,
congeniality, and then even attraction
and love that has grown up. It's all
told with great delicacy.
The depiction of the long climb upwards is
brilliantly felt. One really gets a feel of how
steep it is, how high, and the view from
the top. Trollope here shows some pity for
the poor woman whose job it is to show
the place. They get to the old turret, but the
steps are too broken to attempt, so they
proceed to the "kitchen of the family."
She offers to show them the place where
the (famous of course) oracle once spoke.
The girls of course "scamper off." And
then we get the scene. It is very real.
Brooke said she has just read C. P. Snowe.
He does justice to Trollope's ability with
what seems natural dialogue. The poor
M. Lacordaire hopes "the heat" does
not "incommode" his lady. She suddenly
tells him she has appreciated his kindness
to her all this time. It is not easy to
speak; the hint is not clear, and there
is a sweet comedy in the scene, but
there is also the touching comment from him,
"''my one great consideration is this;--that
I love madame to distraction'' in response
to her "'There are so many things to be
considered.'" She is "'flattered,'" but
says in these matters it is best "'to
be explicit,''' and then we get the real
comment someone her age would make
to someone his: "'the happiness of
a household depends so much on money.'"
(pp129-32). Money he does have.
Up to this point Henry James could have
learned something from Trollope. James
is always trying for this kind of exquisitely
delicate feel. But then Trollope--for the
modern reader--drops down to bathos.
M. Lacordaire has money, but "what is
his business.'' He gets it out: ''je suis
tailleur'" (p 133). I suggest this line
was meant to be comic but also
a serious jolt, where for us it is kind of
strange.
How to grasp the feeling by analogy?
Imagine yourself a lady professor at a university in
Germany who is travelling and falls in love with
a man who is appealing and appears to have
money, and then at the last moment when the
bargain is about to be clinched (marriage
is a bargain), he reveals he is a garbage man.
We are not that far from Trollope in the sense
that we have our class hierarchies too.
I naturally reached for an analogy with a
lady as professor because the point of
view in the story is basically that of
Mrs Thompson and I am a female, but I would
like to offer the idea that the notion that
a woman takes on her husband's rank
and that a man lifts a woman up to his
is not gone from us altogether. Imagine
a medical doctor who is charmed by a
woman during a tour of France and
pops the question; would the discovery
she works for Macdonald's and didn't
graduate high school be as bad? I think
not. I think he'd offer to put her through
school or say "stay home" and we'll
raise a family on my income.
It's so very pleasant. I
was happy for Mrs Thompson and
M. Lacordaire, and I think we were
meant to be so, for our narrator's
last sentence is: "speaking for
myself, I am inclined to think that
she [Mrs Thompson] arrived at last
at a wise decision" (p. 135).
Ellen Moody
Then Bart Hansen wrote in:
In 'The Chateau' we see the difficulties encountered by those who have
reached 'a certain age.' Sutherland points to Mrs Thompson being able
to overcome class prejudice, but I liked the description of the
halting lovemaking. When the middle-aged suitor kneels in the dust
for his proposal, Trollope comments, 'If the thing was to be done,
this way of doing it was, perhaps, as good as any other.'
Bart Date: Sat, 27 Dec 1997 10:12:57 +0000 Nicely judged, Ellen.
Dare we say M Lacordaire (the man whose heart was 'light as air', at least
after the lady had accepted him) as a tailor (ugh!) might have been the
sort of "cove" who had constructed the reverend trousers, so badly mangled
by the women?
Taking the male view (as you have taken the female) one must remember also
the bravery of this man who, risking rejection and loss of face, stakes all
and asks for what he desires most, that is for the better-born English lady
to grace his table and enable him to rise a little above the class of
trader.
Robert J Wright
From: Robert Wright
Subject: Short Stories - "The Château of Prince Polignac" - Introduction
"Should she marry again,--and she put it
to herslef quite hypothetically,--she would look
for no romance in such a second marriage. She
would be content to sit down in a quiet home,
to the tame dull realities of life, satisfied with
the companionship of a man who would be kind and
gentle to her, and whom she could respect and
esteem. Where could she find a companion
with whom this could be more safely anticipated
than with M. Lacordaire?" (p 123)
hansenb@frb.gov
From: Robert Wright
Subject: Short Story: "The Chateau of Prince Polignac"
Kensington, London W87PB England
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